martes, 5 de mayo de 2009

Sophie

One day, a girl called Sophie was walking along the street, when she saw her boyfriend with other girl. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. Since that day, she started to spy them, every time her boyfriend said that he was busy, while he was whith that girl. Sophie was so cross that she took a knife, she was trying to kill the woman who stole her boyfriend. But, her boyfriend, Carl, saw her with the knife, and told her that he was sorry, but he really loved the other girl. Sophie left the knife and tried to persuade Carl to stay with her, but one day, she lost contact of her boyfriend and the girl with him... . She started looking everywhere, but she couldn't find them. She go to his boyfriend parents, but they said to her that they were worried because they hadn't seen him since two days . But Sophie dind't give up, because she really loved him. She searched him in the newspaper, but nothing. One day, she saw him, and started to chase him. He turned around the corner, and she ran to catch him, but when she turned around, she realized that she had lost him. That was the last time she ever saw them.

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  1. Great job! Please include a picture or image and correct: "...with another girl." "...spy on them...busy, but he was with ..." " ...and tried to ...had stolen..." "...contact with ..." "...went to... her boyfriend's parents'house... for two days." "...didn't...""...to follow..." "...ever saw him."

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